When reviewing Zoes essay i was able to constructively help her throughout her essay. She did a real good job so far with portraying her idea around stories and their relevance in our life. I helped her with different ideas throughout her essay relating to the flow of her paper. I think over all she did a good job with pulling in quotes from one of the readings and a narrative project. I liked her idea and the direction she is leading her essay. There is a lot than can be added and improved but i see her essay really coming together and it was nice working with her to hear her very constructive criticism.
