over all I think you have a good sense of what you want to write about and the topic route your going I would just make sure you have enough evidence for the two other sources to connect back with your essay you found. Your told his a but difficult but I defiantly see the relation of the arts and science and how it could relate to the cure or help of the disease DID. Your essay needs more structure but it being your free draft sometimes its also good just to get your ideas and thoughts out. I think creating a layout for your ideas and arranging your evidence may help to set up your essay.
